Poor Imp

Oy, but it's lovely--the Finnish, that is. I only know phrases and a few words in the language. But it's worth it all the same to try to listen to ...

Oy, 'tis always Pat Buchanan, da?

:shock: Can I give you advice? Don't call your character that. It is an English slang word which means a certain part of a girl's anatomy. :oops: Oy, that's, er, ...

I already told you, in this kind of story, it GETS background, only, it comes slowly. I only know of a few damn good writers that can make you understand ...

Oy, and this part is somewhat more present--it all happens in the moment, no interludes of thinking back. But it remains vaguely surreal. It's curious, but there are flickers of ...

Perhaps if everyone hits seventy and two souls with a critique, the password will inexplicably appear. Oy, perfectly serious. ^_~ IMP

So... attention seeker? Er, it's Etan , da? Merely write it rightways, and you'll find the troublemaker. ^_~ IMP

Ha, well, nothing that we've found, Aedomir. ^_^ 'Tisn't syllable count either--I've put that in, and "35 36 33" did no good. It's not in any sort of meter, is ...

I tried quotes from Alice --at least from the book. None got past the "forbidden" response. I have the sinking feeling that this is one of the simplest riddles; and ...

Sanctum is getting into my head. Oy, I riddled through all of Perra's tries yesterday. Luckless. But the main page just went rather haywire and spattered bloody and new sanctum ...

I don't care for poems written to people--not in the specific sense. Ideas, I suppose, seem more apt to, er, my pen. And I don't much like this. I haven't ...

Oy, these have always been worth the read--and this one seems somewhat more linear and less arbitrary than some of its predecessors. Ha, yet it keeps the off-the-wall humour as ...

Er, sing random songs from the dictionary? The dictionary seems rather devoid of songs. I suppose Imp could be included--won't bother me. IMP

'Lo. ^_^ You have some more than amusing dialogue--the exchange, in its repetition, is hilarious. That said, you've also some technical inconsistencies that distract the reader. VERB TENSE Er, don't ...

Just briefly-- The transitions from dibbun's innocence to ill, is a bloody lot smoother, and more eerie. No doubt the language the two use is also more smooth. ^_^ Both ...